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Post by nova on Apr 9, 2008 19:07:36 GMT -6
Nova walked quietly into the park. She looked at the beautiful surroundings for a second then dropped into a crouch. She stalked into the trees and looked around quietly, making sure to pay attention to every detail. She spotted something! But... what is it? She moved a little closer, and realized that it was an adult squirrel sleeping peacefully. Nova, who likes the challenge of a hunt, left the squirrel alone and stalked further into the forest.
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Post by nova on Apr 9, 2008 20:42:02 GMT -6
She started to doze off, so back to the middle of the park she went and climbed up a tree. She stopped on a tree branch and stalked up behind a young sparrow who was starting to make it's nest. She pounced and caught it, then she bit into the neck to make sure that it was dead. She started to eat, listening carefully while chewing away. When she finished, she threw any remains of the bird over the tree and dozed off on the branch.
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Post by Ravers~ on Apr 10, 2008 4:55:00 GMT -6
(Um Nova not to be rude but it would probably sound better if you stopped using the name Nova all the time use she and her a little more. And when talking about the bird you use it 5 times in 4 sentinces. You CAN say it instead of bird.)
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Post by nova on Apr 10, 2008 5:31:11 GMT -6
(im new to all this ^.^ so its no problem thanks for the advice!)
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Post by Ravers~ on Apr 10, 2008 5:40:39 GMT -6
(Welcome.....Tell you yhe truth I'm sort of new too. I'm still not a very great speller, and I make alot of mistakes. But I'm getting the hang of it now.)
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Post by nova on Apr 12, 2008 18:51:29 GMT -6
Nova yawned, stretching. She forgot she was on a tree and fell with a yowl. She shook her head as she laid there, hurt from her fall she decided to lay there for a while longer, and dozed off under the tree curled up in an awkward position.
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