RavenWing's bio

[Ravers~]

Name:Ravenwing
Gender:She-cat
Age:19 moons
Rank:Warrior
Clan:TreeClan

Picture:none

Physical Description: Ravenwing is a lean, medium-to tall she-cat with glossy,jet black fur. She has bright saphire eyes and medium sized white whiskers. She has long legs and sharp claws. Her nose is bright pink and she has a white tail tip and muzzle. She is shaped a little differently then the forest cats because of her heratage of a different clan.

Personality: Ravenwing is kind and caring and loves the life of a warrior. She would defend her clan no matter what she had to do. Even though some times the is snappy, she still cares.Ravenwing loves spending her spare time looking at the sky wondering if her old clan is thinking about her too.

History: Ravenkit was born in a far off clan called FireClan. Her father was Shadowclaw and her mother was Frostfire. She had a brother called Shadowkit. When Ravenpaw became an apprentice her mentor was Snowstorm, her brother's mentor was Flamestar. The night after she was given her warrior name, Orangepelt the medicine cat and her apprentice, Tigerpaw returned from IceStone- like moonstone- bearing bad news. StarClan had told them that... "the wing of raven born into fire, must leave the flame for her destiny is of a different clan". It was decided that if she wanted Ravenwing could leave. She did. She wanted to see beyond her borders and help another clan.

In Character (IC): Ravenwing set off twards the setting sun as BirchTail-her best friend-stared after her.She tried to hold back tears as she left everything she knew and loved behind.'Was StarClan right?'she wondered'Was I ment to leave all this behind?',and the thing she worried about most was'Am I turning my back on my clan?Am I a trator?'

Other: looking for a mate

[[t]Wilted Ros[e]]

(Umm...Sorry, this is just a pet peeve of mine...Do you think you can break the habit of capitalizing the suffix of each warrior's name? And can you please put a space after each punctuation mark you do? Otherwise it looks kind of cramped.)

[Ravers~]

yah......It seems everyone has been telling me that recently. I'll start doing that.

[[t]Wilted Ros[e]]

(Nuu, that's just been me..several times. XD Sorry for my mild nagging. I'm not in a very good mood this week. D=)

[Ravers~]

Thats fine. Nagging doesn't bother me much today.

[Ravers~]

And when I said 'everybody' I ment my family and friends-not you-........no no I didn't mean you were not my friend I ment you were not bothering me:)

[Ravers~]

there fixed it. By the way why haven't been excepted yet?

[[t]Wilted Ros[e]]

(Well, first off, the leader, Dancer, hasn't been on yet, and this is her Clan. So yeah.)

[Ravers~]

Come back Dancer, Come back!!!!!

[{.dancer.}]

Okay! I'm here!

You need one more line in Physical Description, though.

[Ravers~]

Okay, I fixed it.

[{.dancer.}]

Mmkays. Looks good to me.
*stamps*

[Holly]

Woah... Sorry, but FireClan? Not to be mean or anything, which has been my habit for the past few days, but I don't really want there to be a FireClan from far off lands or anything. XP