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Post by Holly on Aug 20, 2007 9:20:29 GMT -6
Isn't Coal a rogue? The four cats should be Clan cats. And you did mention your skin about 3 times now. Oh, it's DemonClan, not GhoulClan. There isn't a Grimestar here. I think he's at a different site. I like the idea with the dust but I don't think the brothers, or mabe even the brother and sister should be loners or rogues. I like how DemonClan cuts StarClan from the other Clans. I think that the four cats work alone, but when each of the Clans has defeated one of the four, the Head Cat of DemonClan tells them to come together to make one cat, just not the leader himself. I don't think the Head Cat of DemonClan should be made up of four cats. So the Head Cat and the combined four cats fight the Clans together. Then the brothers or the sister and brother (I think it should be the sister and brother) realize they have the power of StarClan. (Like they have silver glow around their paws and coming off their pelt) The sister or one of the brothers are killed by the Head Cat. The brother of the sister or the other brother realizes that they can't live on without out their sister or other brother. He actually cries. His tears of pain and love fall onto the sister or other brother and they come alive again with more power form StarClan. They defeat the Head Cat, while the Clans defeat the four cats.
We have like... 5 members. 4 people can have ONE of the four cats. The extra person can be one of the sister and brother or brothers. Someone else can be the other brother or sister or whatever. I think Snowstar could be one of the four cats...
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Post by {.dancer.} on Sept 10, 2007 18:41:34 GMT -6
Maybe they could have help from inside the Clans as well. Rubyheart (in HillClan) could be helping the cat previously from HillClan because she wants revenge. The DemonClan cats could contact her, and have her try and cause conflict that weakens the Clans beforehand for them or something. Or she could try and win favor with the DemonClan cats once she realizes what they're doing, especially the one formerly of TreeClan, because they would vanquish her sister, whom she hates.
I personally think that we should have the evil cats win this battle, and force the leaders, deputies, medicine cats, and any rebels into leaving the Clans. In the next plot (yes, I'm thinking far ahead of where we actually are, but I don't really care), the cats that were forced to become loners band together and rise up with the power of StarClan, which they got from communicating with StarClan using Sparklestone (at least I think that's what it's called), and vanquish the evil forces, thus freeing the forest from their tyranny, and restoring peace, at least for now.
Anyways.... I agree that Snowstar should be one of the four. She has a really good reason to hate WaterClan, or at least a good reason in her eyes. I want to be one of the four, but I'd rather create another cat to do that with because Cinderheart is really vague about which Clan he was from and doesn't have the same type of drive as Snowstar has to hate his previous Clan, whichever that was.
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Post by [t]Wilted Ros[e] on Sept 10, 2007 18:57:39 GMT -6
*points at the second paragraph* I like Dancer's idea with the winnings of the battle. O.O
And for the evil cats, I would like to steal the GrassClan position. And I know it would make more sense to use Witheredstar, but I actually feel Crookedtears would have more "drive" as Dancer calls it. A queen is very protective of her mate and kits, and StarClan took away her mate shortly before she herself died. Plus, in her unfinished bio, it says "she is possibly even more wicked than her mate". Now, I'm going to work on those bios 'cuz they've been sitting there for a while. -.-;
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Post by Holly on Sept 11, 2007 14:28:33 GMT -6
Dancer may have a position and Wilty may steal the GrassClan position. I think I know what you're saying...
So, the DemonClan cats join together and win and drive out all of the recent Clan leaders and deputies? I think the medicine cats should be forced to stay though... Anyways, If that would happen, I think Snowstar should be leader of the Clan she was originally from, WaterClan, Crookedtears, if that's her name, should be the leader of the Clan she was trying to take over, ect.... Then the Head Cat of DemonClan will rule over all the Clans. If one of the leaders what to change something or another, they can't do it without the Head Cat's permission.
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Post by [t]Wilted Ros[e] on Sept 11, 2007 15:06:27 GMT -6
So, um...technically, I'll be a mini leader AND a leader next plot? O.o
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Post by Holly on Sept 14, 2007 15:42:06 GMT -6
You are already a leader, and I think that this should all be ONE plot. It could just be a part one and part two.
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Post by {.dancer.} on Sept 15, 2007 9:01:18 GMT -6
It could either by a two-part plot or two related plots. Really makes no difference however you decide it should be.
Annnnnnd... are the medicine cats going to stay or go? I wasn't clear on that. Will the kits stay, or will they be apprentices by the time Snowstar takes over?
Alright, next question: who is head cat of DemonClan anyways? Was that Witheredstar?
Lastly, I hereby claim the spot of taking over TreeClan.
Now I'm off to create a cat who shall take over TreeClan!
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Post by Holly on Sept 15, 2007 11:24:51 GMT -6
I think that the kits will be apprentices before this all happens. I also think that the Medicine Cats should stay so the cast out Clan cats will have no Medicine Cats to help them. I think Witheredstar will be the Head Cat, unless someone else makes a different Head Cat. Then there will be competition! And finally, you may take over TreeClan, unless of course Coacokitty comes and competes for one of those titles.
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Post by {.dancer.} on Sept 15, 2007 16:28:52 GMT -6
Alright. That makes more sense, 'cause I was thinking, "Huh? Aren't DemonClan cats dead, so they don't need medicine cats at all?"
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Post by [t]Wilted Ros[e] on Sept 16, 2007 12:29:29 GMT -6
*sets down Nintendo DS*
Okay, So in this plot, at the moment, my main-ish characters are Pigeonstar, current leader of GrassClan, Jynxivy, current medicine cat of WaterClan, Witheredstar Head Cat (?) of DemonClan, and Crookedtears, DemonClan cat going to take over GrassClan.
Am I correct?
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Post by Holly on Sept 17, 2007 15:29:23 GMT -6
Sure... But that is of course is Coacokitty wants to be one of the cats that takes over. Unless Whir never comes back...
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Post by whir on Sept 17, 2007 15:32:25 GMT -6
Excuse me! You need to check your pms. I got big news.
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Post by Holly on Sept 17, 2007 15:44:20 GMT -6
I can't believe I was just talking about you and then you came online! Anywasy, you should quickly steal the HillClan position in DemonClan! Ya know, the HillClan/DemonClan cat that takes over HillClan?
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Post by {.dancer.} on Sept 21, 2007 5:46:23 GMT -6
Alright, so I created Arcticfeather, who, though not accepted yet, will take over TreeClan. Her mate, Foxstar, who will be created in three days, is not going to take over TreeClan. He is going to act as a deputy for Arcticfeather while she rules.
If Deerkit is an apprentice by the time the plot starts, is she going to be forced to stay, or is she going to have to leave? She could pretend to be an ordinary apprentice or something, and go with them so that they would have a medicine cat. Or she could just be forced to stay.
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Post by Holly on Sept 21, 2007 15:24:39 GMT -6
Hmmmmmmmm... Ya know, I don't really know. Perhaps they could convince Deerpaw is just a regular apprentice... Ahh, now that I think about it they're DemonClan cats and would be able to look down in advance to see what's going on in the Clans. So they would know if Deerpaw is a medicine cat apprentice or not, because they could look down into the Life Pool, which hasn't been made yet, and see Deerkit's apprentice ceremony themselves.
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Post by {.dancer.} on Sept 29, 2007 22:55:29 GMT -6
Okay. ^^
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Post by Holly on Sept 30, 2007 9:21:58 GMT -6
Never mind, the Life Pool is in StarClan and the Black Pool is in DemonClan. Just so you know, when cats die and enter StarClan or DemonClan, they jump up out of the pool like they had been holding their breath under the water. Cats of DemonClan or StarClan can look into the pool to see what's going on in the live Clans. In very extreme cases can a StarClan or DemonClan cat jump into the pool and enter the world of the live Clans, but they will be in a ghostly form. If they get killed while they are in their ghostly form, they are sent back to DemonClan or StarClan without anymore access to the world of the Clans for at least a year. But that punishment only happens when a StarClan or DemonClan cat is killed, not when they decide to go back to their world on their own. I would think that a StarClan cat wouldn't get killed though, because the only way a StarClan or DemonClan can get sent back to the Golden Forest or the Dark Forest against their own will is if another cat bites them in the neck hard. At any time can a StarClan or DemonClan cat go back to their camp by jumping through the Moonfall (A Waterfall shielding the Mooncave which contains the Moonstone. I've decided to call it the Moonstone). Just so you know if a leader ever goes to the Moonfall, they should decide to just jump through the Moonfall; they should decide to just walk around it.
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Post by whir on Nov 14, 2007 16:35:25 GMT -6
Wait...am I still the owner of one of the Demonclan cats er not? Because I was going to be, i just think i never finished the bio, but i am not sure...help?
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Post by Holly on Nov 14, 2007 16:37:25 GMT -6
You mean Coal? Yeah, but he can't be one of the chosen DemonClan cats cause he doesn't come from a Clan. And the last spot open has to be a former HillClan cat.
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Post by whir on Nov 14, 2007 16:46:16 GMT -6
WHAT DOES THAT HAVE TO DO WITH IT? COAL HATES THE CLANS ANYWAYS!!!!!.......POOR UNFORTUNITE SOULS, SO SAD, SO TRUE....I LUV THAT SONG!!!!....EVEN THOUGH U PROBABLY DON'T KNOW IT. SOWWY I WRITE IN CAPS, I LIKE IT LOT!!!! K,...I WILL GO TA MAKE COAL CLANISH...BUT WHATEV! HE YEARNS TO DESTROY ALL CLAN CATS....THEY MUST FACE THEIR DOOM!!!!! FATE MUST COME UPON THEM... LIKE MAH AD? IN MAH SIGNATURE...IF U DON'T SEE IT, IT WILL APPEAR MAGICALLY WITHIN A FEW MINUTES...(I HAVEN'T PUT IT IN THERE YET...HEH HEH HEH!)
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