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WaterClan
Leader: Hollystar
Deputy: Haloheart
Medicine Cat: Jynxivy
Medicine Cat Apprentice: Deerpaw

HillClan
Leader: Ironstar
Deputy: Rainpelt
Medicine Cat: Spottedpath
Medicine Cat Apprentice: Open

TreeClan
Leader: Brightstar
Deputy: Open
Medicine Cat: Open
Medicine Cat Apprentice: Open
Chosen Female Cat: Doveheart
Chosen Male Cat: Leafbreeze

GrassClan
Leader: Pigeonstar
Deputy: Ghostheart
Medicine Cat: Open
Medicine Cat Apprentice: Limepaw

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Glittering Warriors
Have you ever wondered what it would be like to be a cat? Or have you ever wanted to make the decissions a Warrior Cat would have to make? Here you can! You can make your own Warrior, Apprentice, Kit, or even Elder or Queen and role play them! You can experience the thrill of hunting, the danger of battle, and even the pleasure of protecting your Clan! All you have to do is start off with a cat.

Plot
Everything is peaceful in the Clans, but they don't know what the DemonClan cats are planning. Deep within the Dark Forest, DemonClan is planning revenge by choosing four cats, one that was once of WaterClan, one that was once of HillClan, one that was once of TreeClan, and one that was once of GrassClan. Those four cats of DemonClan will jump through the Black Pool, which leads to the world of the four live Clans. They will stalk among the leaders and try to possess them. Once they have succeded, the leader of DemonClan will come down to the world of the Clans and rule all of the forest, along with the help of the four cats that possess the true leaders. But then, two cats, brother and sister, find that StarClan needs them. DemonClan has cut StarClan away from the live Clans, but they somehow find a way to tell the brother and sister that they are to save the four Clans...

Comments
If you have a High Ranking cat and aren't going to RP them a lot, I would suggest coming online more often if possible or giving up your high position, although that would not be good!

Inky's comment: HEY, peoples! Let's get on with the plot. Remember to create your sacrifices! <3
And PLEASE make a medicine cat for me!!

Gathering: One should be starting soon! O <--Full Moon!

Staff
Holly
Wilted Rose
Dancer
Cocoakitty
Spotted
Feral
Whir

Chosen DemonClan Cats
Snowstar (WaterClan)
Shadowpelt (HillClan)
Articfeather (TreeClan)
Crookedtears (GrassClan)

Weather

Season: Leaffall
It's definitely getting closer to Leafbare. It hasn't snowed yet, but prey is disappearing. There are just a few crinkled, dead leaves hanging from the trees. Brrr, it's cold out there!

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« Thread Started on May 25, 2009, 8:01pm »

Name:Shadowclaw
Gender: Tom
Age: 35
Rank: Deputy
Clan:TreeClan
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Physical Description: He is a black cat with green eyes. He has a black pelt with darker flecks of black. He is a tall cat with a fairly long tail. Good for climbing trees. He has large paws and long sharp claws. He is a fairly good sized cat but not the biggest. He has alot of speed.
Personality: He is a patient cat. He can deal with the worst apprentices but can't stand irresponsible warriors. He is Very nice and respectful to other leaders. He usually prefers tree climbing and hunting. He takes a liking to outgoing and energetic cats. He is a nice cat.
History: He was born into tree clan by his mom, dawnflower. He became an apprentice and then a warrior. He immediately became a wonderful hunter and fighter. He was quickly appointed as deputy and currently serves his clan well. He is well liked by most of the clan. He has a scar on his face from a badger attacking. He had a fight with greencough but got through it.
In Character (IC): Shadowpelt was on patrol running through the forest when an apprentice stopped.
" I smell hillclan" the apprentice said. "Shadowpelt flicked his tail and ordered the patrol to follow the scent. They stalked along and continued to sniff. He found them. "A hillclan patrol". They yowled and charged into battle. Shadowpelt leaped onto one of the cats and clawed at his back. He nipped his tail and sent him running. The rest of the patrol charged off. "We fought them off", The apprentence said. They stalked back for camp.
Other: He is single but wants a mate.
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« Reply #1 on May 26, 2009, 4:20pm »

Hmm...You need a few more lines in each section, and he seems a little idealized. "He is loved by them all"? There is a point where that becomes untrue, even if it is a well-liked cat.

There is also the occasional capitalization error, but would let that slide so long as it doesn't constantly pop up in your actual roleplaying.
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« Reply #2 on May 26, 2009, 9:21pm »

I didn't end the year with the best grammer grade. XD. I will modify it tommorow.
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« Reply #3 on May 27, 2009, 2:01pm »

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« Reply #4 on May 27, 2009, 2:35pm »

Just an eensie bit more in personality, and then either Dancer's or Holly's extra approval (for positional purposes), and you should be good to go!
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« Reply #5 on May 29, 2009, 2:02pm »

I need it accepted now.
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« Reply #6 on May 30, 2009, 9:53am »

Get some patience, already.
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« Reply #7 on Jun 1, 2009, 3:20pm »

I am sorry.
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 Re: Shadowpelt
« Reply #8 on Jun 3, 2009, 9:29am »

Well... You're kinda right about being impatient, though. Cuz Holly never comes online anymore. I'mma try to remember to call her after her school gets out today.
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« Reply #9 on Jun 6, 2009, 10:24am »

Ya, so am I accepted?
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« Reply #10 on Jun 10, 2009, 4:08pm »

    I'M HERE, DUR. XD

    Alrighty here...
    Eh, yeah, that's pretty good. *looks back and forth for dancer* Well, whatever.
    I have to agree with the capitalization and stuff, but that can be fixed when RPing.

    *ACCEPTED*
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« Reply #11 on Jun 21, 2009, 10:26pm »

THIS THREAD HAS BEEN RE-OPENED BECAUSE IT REQUIRES CHANGES. Sunstar, please read the PM I sent you so this bio can be re-accepted.
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« Reply #12 on Jun 29, 2009, 8:17pm »

YAY. THIS BIO HAS BEEN RE-ACCEPTED. =D
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« Reply #13 on Jun 30, 2009, 8:36pm »

    8D

    *ACCEPTED AGAIN*
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« Reply #14 on Jun 30, 2009, 9:06pm »

Erm.. I'm not even gonna say anything.. Lol, but I am anyways. =D
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